الاماكن
28-06-2007, 05:49 AM
قصيده اعجبتني فنقلتها لكم
اتمنى اتمنى تعجبكم لا تحرموني ردودكم ..
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I want to you all to read my first poem and tell me about your opinion
I wrote it , then I ****d it : A story of my angel
I want to tell you all
About a girl i do like
An angel that turned
On my whole life light
If I think about her
I stay awake all the night
She was going to suiside
Once when we had a fight
I wanted to say I am sorry
Because I knew that she was right
So I entered her room
I saw that she was allright
When I was going out of
The room I catched a sight
I realized that she was
Drissing all in white
Also I saw her innocent
Eye was shedding the tear
and i saw her innocent
Eyes was full of fear
I have become closer and
Said somethings in her ear
I said I am sorry I wont
make you sad again my dear
اتمنى اتمنى تعجبكم لا تحرموني ردودكم ..
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I want to you all to read my first poem and tell me about your opinion
I wrote it , then I ****d it : A story of my angel
I want to tell you all
About a girl i do like
An angel that turned
On my whole life light
If I think about her
I stay awake all the night
She was going to suiside
Once when we had a fight
I wanted to say I am sorry
Because I knew that she was right
So I entered her room
I saw that she was allright
When I was going out of
The room I catched a sight
I realized that she was
Drissing all in white
Also I saw her innocent
Eye was shedding the tear
and i saw her innocent
Eyes was full of fear
I have become closer and
Said somethings in her ear
I said I am sorry I wont
make you sad again my dear